English Language Pronunciations

Over dinner one night during a three-day Girl Scout (Troop 1096) reunion in Ohio, we ten or so attendees had a rousing interaction about mispronounced words in the English language. Among our pet peeves–and there were so many–were mispronunciations of realtor, nuclear, and jewelry, just to name three, and lack of understanding of when to use “she and I” versus “her and me,” for example.

I’m sure any reader of Yours In Books would have participated just as heartily as we all did. I admit it did surprise me how long the discussion went on and how many of us were actively engaged in it. Usually when I bring the topic up with friends or family, it takes only about four minutes for the subject to be changed… Every so often, though, a book on a grammatical theme comes along and hits the bestseller lists–for instance, Woe Is I and Eats, Shoots & Leaves.

Shortly after we Girl Scout reuniters had returned to our far-flung homes, one of us shared the following in an email. (If any of you knows who wrote this poem, please Comment–I haven’t been able to discover the source. Therefore, I don’t know whether it’s still protected by copyright or not.)

Arthur Clough, A Victorian Poet
(poem below by … anyone know?)

I seldom rest beneath a
bough
To read the lines of Arthur
Clough.
I find his thoughts insipid,
though
Victorians loved Arthur
Clough.
Indeed, they could not get
enough
Of platitudes by Arthur
Clough.
I groan, I gulp, I snort, I
cough
When I must wade through Arthur
Clough;
And I am glad that I am
through
With this review of Arthur
Clough.

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Book Marketing, Part 3 (and a Rant)

Over a July 4 holiday visit to the East Coast, my sister had the opportunity to visit the Strand Bookstore in New York City, about which she raved to me in a recent communique. Once I got over my intense jealousy that she (1) was in New York City and (2) discovered a great bookstore, I got online and checked it out. For some reason the “embed video” code isn’t working for this one, but here’s the link: http://youtu.be/-dWBuFFxTMw. Copy and paste into your browser URL bar if this doesn’t hot-link in the translation.

I’m disturbed that (1) the speaker’s name, shown in a banner at one point in the vid, is given as Nancy Basss Wyden–yup, three esses in the middle name (who would notice?); and (2) the speaker says the bookstore is “run by my dad and I” when she should have said “run by my dad and me” (who would notice?).

Well, it may be a great bookstore, and I’m sold that it is, but couldn’t they have cleaned up their spelling and grammar act before posting the vid? To answer the “who would notice?” questions in the prior paragraph, an editor would notice, and did. I may not make my living editing anymore, but some skills die hard. The thing that bothers me is this is a bookstore ad, not an ad for the local car wash (no offense meant!). If we in the book biz can’t write and speak correctly–especially when it’s headed out for publication as a formal ad piece, it’s just a matter of time before our English teachers won’t either.

Why does it matter? Because communication is hard enough, and we need all the help we can get. Language spelling and grammar rules provide a basic platform upon which we can all agree and build ideas from there. We all did once agree on those rules, but now what? And come to think of it, maybe there’s an error in the embedding code there on YouTube… Coding matters! And come to think of it, maybe the recent update I just performed on WordPress has a problem in it. Updates matter! Whew, I think I’ll go have lunch.

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Book Marketing, Part 2

Retail booksellers are familiar with a great publication called “Shelf Awareness” that gives them current information about the book industry, publishers’ plans for upcoming books, and some of the publicity underway on recently published books. The online magazine provides lots of ideas to help booksellers present the latest to their customers. It is a terrific marketing-support outlet for publishers and booksellers alike.

Recently, Shelf Awareness has expanded its venue to include a publication aimed directly at readers. It’s a free e-newsletter (comes into your email) called “Shelf Awareness: Enlightenment for Readers.” If you’re a book lover, you may want to check into this. As I said, it’s free! (I have no connection to it except as one of the audience who has choosen to receive the weekly email.)

The newsletter reviews 25 books each week along with author interviews, book excerpts, giveaways and more. It doesn’t sell directly from its review section–i.e., you can’t click on the book cover there and be taken to a place to buy it–because the publication is meant to help all booksellers communicate to readers, not just a particular bookseller. You will find some books being specifically advertised by a publisher or retailer, but it’s obvious which ones those are (and those you can, indeed, click on to go elsewhere). Overall, the newsletter simply provides a lot of fun information to readers.

Right now Shelf Awareness is running a contest for new subscribers. If you’re interested, click on the “For Fun” page tab above.

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Happy Independence Day Weekend



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Happy Independence Day and weekend to my fellow citizens of the USA! For your holiday enjoyment I have put together (1) a brief but challenging trivia quiz and (2) a book recommendation for the occasion. Answers to the quiz are provided after the book recommendation. As a special bonus this holiday weekend I’m also including, via the menu-tab above called “July 4 Tribute,” the full text of Longfellow’s poem about our Mr. Paul Revere’s ride.

Trivia Quiz

  1. What thirteen colonies existed as of July 4, 1776?
  2. Which one or more of these events occurred in the same year as the signing of the Declaration of Independence? (a) The Boston Tea Party; (b) The Stamp Act; (c) publication of Paine’s “Common Sense”; (d) the famous ride of Paul Revere
  3. Which of the following clauses or phrases did NOT appear in the Declaration of Independence? (a) We the People of the United States; (b) Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness; (c) We hold these truths to be self-evident; (d) When, in the course of human events
  4. In the painting by John Trumbull pictured here (titled Signing of the Declaration of Independence, 1776), who are the five men standing just in front of the table, and who is the man seated on the other side?

Book Apropos of the Fourth of July Holiday

There are probably a gazillion books apropos to this holiday, but I think probably the most current, complete, easiest to read would be 1776 by David McCullough, available in paperback. The book trailer below was created by the publisher, Simon & Schuster. Full disclosure: I have not read this book. But it really sounds great, don’t you think?

Answers to Trivia Quiz

1: Massachusetts Bay (would become the states of Massachusetts/MA and Maine/ME), NH, CT, NY, RI, NJ, PA, VA, MD, DE, NC, SC, GA
2: Only item c, but if you’d like to be reminded about all these items, click through on the following links:
Boston Tea Party
The Stamp Act
Paine’s Common Sense
Paul Revere’s Ride
3: Item a (that is in our Constitution)
4: Standing in front of table, L to R, John Adams, Roger Sherman, Robert R. Livingston, Thomas Jefferson, Benjamin Franklin; seated at table is John Hancock. A listing of all the participants portrayed appears in Wikipedia’s entry Trumbull’s Declaration of Independence

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The Midwest Book Review (dot com), Bless Them

The Midwest Book Review (dot com), bless them, has given their own version of a thumbs-up to my book The Cleveland Rutters. An organization of volunteers, established in 1976, MBR is among the very few established review sources to include self-published authors alongside books published by small presses and academic presses. The organization is “committed to promoting literacy, library usage, and small press publishing.” (Visit their website to get a feel for how MBR operates.)

When I was a small press owner-publisher (for VanderWyk & Burnham), MBR was a trustworthy source of objective reviews. Well-known sources such as major newspapers (e.g., New York Times, Washington Post, Los Angeles Times), Kirkus Reviews, Publishers Weekly, Library Review, and so on are generally preoccupied with output from larger publishers and less likely to give any kind of priority attention to (excellent!) books coming out of small or academic presses. They do some, but few, fewer, and fewst. (I know, not a word, but I couldn’t resist.)

I have not meant for The Cleveland Rutters to have wide distribution—not that I would argue with that if it happened—so I didn’t send a copy to the heavy hitting review sources, knowing it wouldn’t appeal to them in any case. But I did think MBR would see its value, and they did. They don’t accept financial contributions from authors or publishers lest they invoke cries of conflict of interest, but they welcome donations of postage stamps “for the cause.” My thank-you note to them will certainly make that donation.

Here’s what MBR’s reviewer John Burroughs wrote:

  • The stories of our families are similar, but different enough to peak our curiosity. “The Cleveland Rutters: One Daughter’s Retrospection” is a tribute, memoir, and biography blended into one as daughter Meredith Ann Rutter remembers her family and the changes they faced as the New England family faced life together, offering a realistic picture of family life in the 1950s and 1960s. “The Cleveland Rutters” is worth considering for familial memoirs, highly recommended.
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Progress on First Novel, Part 1

Have I mentioned that I’m writing a novel? I didn’t think so. Maybe I’ve harbored a fear that I might jinx the process if I say something. But I can’t think of a good reason not to let you, dear reader of Yours In Books, know about this major “book” thing that’s happening in my life. I’m not ready to provide you with my working title yet, let alone an excerpt,
because the manuscript is still a complete work in progress.

What I can say is that it’s a work of “cozy suspense fiction.” I’ve written the first draft and shared it with four people. The first three would be expected to tell me it’s great, and they did; and of course, I believed them. The fourth reader was an editor I paid to tell me the truth. And she did. She said it’s not ready for editing yet. To support her opinion she wrote four single-spaced typed pages of commentary, cluing me in on where I need to do more work. I got my money’s worth.

Here are the reactions I’ve experienced to the feedback, in the order I’ve experienced them:

  • This editor is so right. I knew it needed more work. But, gee, this much more work?
  • And really, what does she mean, my beloved surprise ending won’t fly? Does this editor really know what she’s talking about?
  • Yes, she does. I know she does, that’s why I hired her.
  • I can’t start revising yet because my husband and I are relocating for the summer.
  • I can’t start revising yet because I’m going to Paris!
  • I can’t start revising yet because I’m settling back into life after Paris.
  • Maybe after I make some of her other changes she’ll rethink her condemnation of the surprise ending.
  • I don’t even know where to begin revising this.
  • I guess I’ll start by inserting a bit more information about characters x and y.
  • Whew, okay, maybe I can do this after all.
  • Still don’t know about that ending, though.

So that’s where I’m at just now. Lots and lots of reworking still underway. I’m also lined up for my first writing conference, later in July (with University of Southern Maine), and this novel will be the item I’m taking with me to work on while there. I hope the novel-class leader is as good as my editor. And of course, I hope she’ll tell me my current surprise ending is a keeper. Even though I know it’s not. Well, probably not. Stay tuned.

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Face-to-Face Time in Old-Style Publishing

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My posting on June 1 was titled “Good Feelings from Groups.” Soon after posting it, while searching for a document on a wholly different subject, I unearthed a business plan I’d written in the late 1990s for my publishing company at the time. In it, I quoted two paragraphs related to the power of groups within a publishing company. In rereading that excerpt, I realized I have not been as group-phobic as I thought. In fact, I’ve been group-oriented my entire working life.

Here’s how John Huenefeld described the key to an effectively organized publishing house. (I’m sure it applies to all companies to some degree or other.) Excerpted from The Huenefeld Guide to Book Publishing (1993 copyright):

  • In work as complex (and often ethereal) as publishing, it is not always easy for individuals to see just how their efforts fit into the total process—or how they affect group results. . . . But if one is clearly identified as a member of a specific segment of the organization—and if the goals of that segment are clearly and appropriately stated, impersonally measured, and openly reported—it becomes much easier to focus one’s thoughts and labors. And if those measurements are routinely posted side-by-side with the results being achieved by other groups within the organization, subtle but powerful peer pressure is exerted on each staff member “not to let their team down” in hopefully-friendly competition with those other groups.
  • Therein lies the key to effective organization of your publishing house. If the publisher can get one group of people to dedicate themselves to maximizing the sales volume [the marketing function], a second to assume responsibility for finding new books that will give that marketing effort maximum support [acquisition], a third group who’ll put those new products into the inventory on time with a minimum utilization of capital [prepress development], and a fourth who will look after the fiscal/physical assets in such a manner that the publishing house gets to retain a maximum percentage of its sales revenue as “profit” [business operations]—then that publisher can hardly fail! And with the coordinating publisher’s office separately identified as general management, we’ve defined the five basic staff components of an intelligently organized publishing house.

I cannot find these two paragraphs in the 2001 copyright, which was published after the publication rights transferred to a different company shortly before Huenefeld retired. The 2001 version incorporated formatting changes that may have required cutting some of the more philosophical verbiage, which is too bad, since paragraphs such as the above helped me, for one, buy into all the charts and lists provided in that extraordinarily helpful book. It was one of my bibles as I struggled to put together a solid small press.

Timing is everything, though, and I think the content of John Huenefeld’s book started requiring too many changes to hold its own in the new world of publishing, as that world went more and more digital before, during, and after any book it created. In publishing-company operations, both timing and procedures were truncated as digitalization streamlined every step from manuscript preparation through page design, prepress production, printing, and promotion.

As I’ve mentioned elsewhere, many of the jobs are now outsourced positions supported by people working from their homes. Now a truly group-phobic person (which, it turned out, I’m not) can probably enjoy her/his job even more. But Huenefeld’s original charts and lists supporting each group in his ideal company probably had to be re-created increasingly as each new version of Quark (and such) came out. Face-to-face group interactions–virtual meetings notwithstanding–became more and more rare, and his book was predicated on them. In the end there had to have been too many changes for the final publisher of The Huenefeld Guide to Book Publishing to justify continuation of publication based on the original model.

Publishing can still be a money-making industry, but it has taken new forms and requires some different skills in addition to the age-old ones. People involved in publishing today would still declare “group support” to be a strong factor in getting it all done. But I wonder if there’s a book out there that makes it as obviously necessary as Huenefeld’s book did.

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Compulsory Voting

Have you ever heard of this concept of compulsory voting? I never had. It took a chance meeting and conversation in the gardens at the Palace of Versailles with a couple from Australia to educate me on this one. (Don’t you love it?) As civil servants in their country, both the man (fire department) and the woman (police department) were very much in favor of compulsory voting, which is not only a law there but an enforced law. You are fined $300 if you don’t vote.

Since returning from vacation, I’ve asked several people if they ever heard of compulsory voting, and usually the answer is no. I think it’s time we had a conversation about it! We’re all aware of the growing schism in this country between the haves and have-nots, and I’m thinking that compulsory voting, enforced, could help us narrow that gap. That was the Australian couple’s point, and it made great sense to me.

Wikipedia (see Compulsory Voting) has a good summary on the perceived pros and cons. It looks to me like the reasons to go that route far outweigh the reasons not to. Maybe Australia’s $300 is too hefty a fine, but there are other ways to encourage compliance besides or in addition to (a smaller amount of) money. In fact, I’m wondering if just the fact that it would be a law might result in a better voter turnout than our current situation without such a law.

After reading the Wikipedia information, I wondered whether a stand-alone book or book chapter had ever gone into the subject, and if so, when. Ta-da. I was not disappointed to learn that in 2009 the United Nations published Full Participation. (The author is listed as Sarah Birch, but I think she’s representing the U.N.) Probably any books published by the United Nations never get trailers done as part of major marketing plans. That’s a shame, because I think this is a topic that we voters in this country should take a look at. One way I can encourage the conversation is by writing this blog post and highlighting the book’s existence. I would love to read any comments if you have experience with or opinions about this topic. Also, don’t forget the “Share” button here; use it to inform others in your own circles about this concept.

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Young Adult Fiction Reviewer

I’m not a parent, but I have many good friends who are parents. I had two parents myself. My stepkids are parents. I’ve also been known to have opinions about parenting, which I usually keep to myself.

So, with that overall caveat, allow me to introduce you parents, grandparents, aunts or uncles of “young adults” (ages 14 – 21 in the fiction-books world) to the below video. I found this while surfing for something else to do with books. What a find! Introduce your own young adult readers to this video (YouTube), and ask them what they think. The creator, “xSandyPartsu,” is hoping to raise her subscription base to 100. [Update: I let her know about this posting, and she thanked me and let me know she did hit 100 since her vid first went up. You Go Girl!]

Harry Potter (J. K. Rowling)
Mockingjay (Suzanne Collins)
If I Say (Gayle Forman)
Stolen (Lucy Christopher)
Shiver (Maggie Stiefvater)
Jellicoe Road (Melina Marchetta)

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Life-Changing Books Redux / Eating Animals

About thirty years ago, I swore off veal. I had read a one-page consciousness-raising ad about how calves are treated from birth to death to make them good sources of veal. Imagine my shock the other day when I saw the exact same ad show up again in a magazine I was reading. Say what? I haven’t eaten veal for thirty years and these animals are still being treated like this? How naïve was I to think I could make a difference.

As I mentioned in my June 5 posting, I recently read a book that I knew as I was reading would become life-changing for me. The book is Eating Animals by Jonathan Safran Foer. Foer is a brilliant author of literary fiction—he wrote one of my favorite books ever (Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close). I knew he’d bring that special touch to nonfiction as well. Eating Animals is one of those books that is practically impossible to discuss with someone who hasn’t read it, which makes writing this blog piece a conundrum for me. How much can/should I say and from what angle, and still encourage you to read it for yourself? Here’s what I’ve settled on:

The author says straight out in his lead-in that this is not a book that sets out to make you a vegan or vegetarian. And it’s true. Readers are left with that decision to make for themselves. It’s too bad, I think, that the book is called what it is, since the title itself will turn off way too many people. It’s a threatening topic just in the statement of the topic. And yet the book will tell you everything you ever wanted to know about eating animals. Ah, there’s the rub. Most of us don’t want to know anything about eating animals; we just want to eat the animals. They taste so good.

Foer understands this. He never denies the tastiness of meat (beef, poultry, fish …). He also never hides the viewpoints of meat eaters and meat raisers of all kinds but instead includes them in the book, usually in their own words. It’s a full-disclosure book. What Foer does besides all that, however, is make you read the hard parts as well. There will be tears. When I gave up veal thirty years ago, I had no idea that calves weren’t the only sentient beings experiencing abuse throughout their life. The factory-farming systems in place today are making life for billions of animals every year a literal hell on earth. Foer doesn’t let us off that hook. A major point Foer makes is this: “Our response to the factory farm is ultimately a test of how we respond to the powerless, to the most distant, to the voiceless—it is a test of how we act when no one is forcing us to act one way or another. Consistency is not required, but engagement with the problem is.”

At the same time (still reading?), the statistics about the environmental destruction and threats to human health are equally frightening. If one’s compassion muscle for animals has atrophied, there are more than enough reasons to worry about the human population instead. I urge you to find the strength to read Eating Animals. For my part, I’ve joined Farm Forward. I’ve also ordered two cookbooks to help me get better at cooking without contributing to this overwhelming world problem. If you are as ignorant as I was about the realities of factory farming, I double-dare you to read Eating Animals. You can still be an omnivore and make a difference.

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